When Men Wreck Their Endangered Bodies

Carol Tyx speaks Nov. 5 at Mount Mercy University, her first live appearance to read from her book, published this year. She has done other readings, but via video conferencing. Most of her audience was online.

Poet Carol Tyx, who retired last year and is now a professor emeritus at Mount Mercy Univeristy, came back to campus Nov. 5, 2020 as a visiting writer. She has written a book of poems called “Remaking Achilles.”

It’s a grim story, but one I’m glad that she has told. It takes place at the Angola State Prison, the largest state prison in the U.S.A, in Louisiana. In 1951, 31 white inmates at the prison (where the African-American prisoners outnumbered them) slashed their own Achilles tendons so that they would be unable to walk. Achilles is also the name of an imagined Black inmate who is a character in Carol’s book.

Carol Tyx speaks at Mount Mercy University.

The prison used its inmates as labor on an 18,000-acre plantation, a modern-day form of slavery. The men didn’t want to be able to walk so that they could not be forced to work in the fields. And the slashers caused such a stir that a public investigation led to reforms.

As Tyx notes, those reforms weren’t the end to troubles at the prison—but she said she wanted to explore the story of men who literally put their bodies in danger in the hopes of avoiding cruel treatment and perhaps gaining more of a chance of surviving prison. They were cutting their own bodies to try to save them.

The poems are presented in a chronological order, and many voices are heard: “Ain’t got what it takes for the long line today, four miles out, four miles back.” Prisoners, a nurse who sacrificed her job to testify to an investigating committee, a sheriff—they are heard in this collection.

Student in Flaherty Community Room listens to Carol Tyx.

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More of my images from the event.

It was great to hear Carol read her words and describe the reasons for the poems.

My wife, a nursing professor at MMU, decided to accompany me to the poetry reading, and I think she was glad she did. The nurse’s story was a pivotal one, and when the talk was over, I purchased a copy of the book for her.

I’ll read it too. Probably not in one uninterrupted slog—I don’t always read a lot of poetry at once—but the taste of this book was enough to make me hungry for more.

Mary Vermillion, MMU English professor, displays Carol Tyx’s book.

Mary Vermillion commented on Facebook that this is the first image of her masked.

It’s a ghastly story, but one that Carol has given voice to—or many voices to. As she noted, left untold, the story would fade away.

Carol was introduced by Mary Vermillion, English professor at Mount Mercy. Both have helped run a book club, where students from MMU can discuss books with inmates at the Anamosa State Penitentiary, not too far away.

Anyway, I think any writer does a service if they can take a reader somewhere new, help them see the world, a bit, through others’ eyes. I think that is what Carol has done here, and I look forward to seeing the world through different eyes when I read her poems. Mary has written more about the book:

REMAKING ACHILLES: Poetry by Carol Tyx

Mount Mercy video of the presentation.

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Dr. Carol Tyx discusses her poetry at an afternoon session Sept. 19, 2013, at MMU.

I’m definitely a prose writer. I’ve done some poetry in the past, mostly for classes when I was undergraduate or high school student, but in terms of expressing myself, prose is where it’s at.

But, it was interesting listening to Dr. Carol Tyx this afternoon. A poet, she read some of her works and answered questions during a visiting writers program at Mount Mercy University.

For one thing, her poetry seems in touch with narrative and description, which are two aspects I aim for in my own writing.

Dr. Carol Tyx pauses to think during a poetry Q and A Sept. 19 at MMU.

But what struck me the most were her remarks about her writing and editing process. I didn’t take notes, so this is all from memory, but in short:

• She seems to write mostly about real life. Granted, sometimes, she uses a character from a book she has read, but a lot of her poetry is intensely personal. Of the poems that she read, I think the one about her father’s death struck me the most—it was well crafted and full of emotion. Dr. Tyx was asked whether she prefers happy or sad poetry subjects, since her latest book has both, and she said it doesn’t really matter. I find the same, in some ways. Not that I don’t like happy, but what usually moves me is what is important to me, and the more intense an experience is, the easier it is to write about it. I find that writing is a way for me to process life experience, and that partly seems to be her approach, too.

•  She has an interesting editing process. Dr. Tyx described how she has files on her computer of raw work, work that is being edited and work that is ready to release. “My poems go on a journey,” she said. She has written many, but notes that only two or three emerged whole—the rest take more crafting. “I can spend an inordinate amount of time on whether to place a comma,” she said. Maybe it’s because I deal strictly in prose, but I don’t tend to get so caught up in the mechanical details—but for me, most writing does evolve. If I’m struggling with a blog post, I’ll let it sit a day and come back, and sometimes what gets posted is far from where I started. Granted, other times it just flows. It seems to be flowing, now, which I hope is OK. Anyway, that idea of writing going on a journey is a pretty close description of what I do.

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  Dr. Mary Vermillion introduces Dr. Carol Tyx Sept. 19 at MMU.

  She is inspired by nature. She described being assigned a poem to write in sixth grade, and refusing to come in for dinner because she wanted to stay in the backyard until a poem emerged—and how she discovered it doesn’t usually work that way, but, on the other hand, the maple tree in the yard proved to be her inspiration. I don’t always write about nature, but I do spend a fair amount of time in my backyard, at least in summer, and there’s a reason I use “garden” in the name of my blog. I also draw inspiration from planet Earth. It was comforting to read a headline today that scientists predict this planet should remain in the Goldilocks zone for more than a billion more years. It’s a nice planet, full of gorgeous maples to inspire young poets in plenty of backyards. In fact, plants such as tomatoes and raspberry bushes where featured in several of the works Dr. Tyx read.

I enjoyed the afternoon. I hope the evening reading went well, too. And it was nice to see the Flaherty Community Room pretty packed for this program. More of my photos.

Write on, Dr. Tyx, right on.

Some Prose and Poetry and Cowboys

Yeah, it's here. Mary is so excited. So am I.

Audrey and I attended an eclectic and fun program Thursday night at Mount Mercy University.

The student English Club hosted an “authors’ night” that featured five MMU English Professors.

Well, I enjoyed it all. The free food, the readings, the insight into James Joyce (whose novels I have not yet read, but I’ll check the Kindle site and see if Ulysses is a free classic), etc.

Christopher DeVault speaks about his new book on James Joyce.

Christopher DeVault’s opening reflections on Joyce were the most cerebral part of the evening, but all five English profs had interesting points to make.

Jim Grove shared insights into one of the first movies I saw and enjoyed in the theater as a kid: The original “True Grit” starring John Wayne came out when I was 11 years old. Maybe it helped that I was 11 when I saw it, but I’ve always liked that movie. I’m not big into John Wayne, and the follow-up movie with Katharine Hepburn didn’t do much for me, but True Grit was colorful and captivating. Not all movies I liked as a kid have aged well, and I cannot honestly say True Grit is among my all-time favorites now, but I still find it a pleasant flick.

I think that one reason I enjoyed the movie when it came out was that it featured a strong female character. I was a lone boy in a family with seven children, and, surrounded by six sisters, I had plenty of real-life object lessons in proto-feminism. As Grove noted, the girl in the movie True Grit was not near as strong as the character had been in the source book, and the opening song cast her in a decidedly dependent role.  Still, even in the movie, the girl had spine.

His commentary was on the 1969 movie. I have not seen, but am now more anxious to see, the more recent version. Sounds like a DVD rental for the day after graduation.

Joy Ochs spoke compellingly about her work with a program at Zion National Park that takes honors students and gives them more insight into the natural wonder of that area. I have not been there, but now I want to be.

Yet, I have to say (well, I guess I don’t have to say—there is a First Amendment that provides both freedom of speech and freedom from speech—but I’m willing to say) that the night’s two other speakers were the highlights for me.

Carol Tyx has a new book of poetry and read a few. And Mary Vermillion shared the opening of her new mystery novel, due out in May.

Carol Tyx reads and talks about poetry.

Well. Tyx read poetry on topics that felt like an emotional roller coaster ride, to me. We got everything from the wonder of a grandchild to the gravity of death—thoughts about her father’s final moments and a poem about a racial murder in Texas. There even was an analogy of love in a cereal bowl. Trust me, it worked.

Cover of Mary's new book (and Paha)

And Mary’s opening scene felt like hearing from old friends. I think there was a visible stir of pleasure in the room when Mara’s flamboyant male gay housemate sashayed into the scene. I’m already ready to grab “Seminal Murder” as soon as it comes out, just to see what my favorite carrot-topped, radio host, lesbian amateur sleuth is up to.

Carol, I think you almost did the impossible. You’ve probably sold me a book of poetry. Mary, you’ve done the quite likely. I would have bought your mystery novel anyway, but am even more excited to do so, now.

Chris, I don’t promise I’ll rush to get a book of analysis of Joyce, but this half Irish boy is now more curious about him.  Joy, I think you and I share a love of nature, and it was a pleasure to finally see your fine photos at the end.

Mary Vermillion brings back Mara, her crime-solving sleuth, in "Seminal Murder."

And Jim, Jim, Jim. Yeah, you rusty old cowboy. I’m going to rent the new “True Grit” soon. And watch the old one right after it. And probably enjoy them both, even the bad Glen Campbell song.

Thanks, English Club, it was fun. English profs, you have another year to write your next books. Let’s do this again.